This memoir is well written and I can really tell how the author cares for the sport. The author should have given more detail about the first and last game, and at the least the last game. He gives a good image of the second game, talking about the penalty kicks and the nerves he was feeling. He mentions that he thought his team better but never provided an example and if he did, I think the author could have provided evidence as to why he believes his team was better Thanatos the other team. Other than that and a few minor writing mistakes, the author provides a clear picture of a soccer tournament he played in when he was younger and truly shows how important the sport was to him.