After reading my peer review, I thought back to what was an important moment for me that happens in baseball, and I thought back to the time when I first started to be happy again. I told the story of the time I first felt truly accepted in high school, and revised my conclusion. I chose this specific game because I feel as if it wasn’t a turnping point for me in high school, a turn into the right direction. I also tried to show the impact that this sport had on me mentioning how it helped relieve stress and my anger, and make close friends and help with my self confidence.